Having watched Marvel's Thor 2, which I enjoyed a lot, I could not help noticing some aspects of the story, the characters and the overall presentation that did not completely satisfy me. I came up with an idea for a third movie and decided to give it a go. I began to find out about the art of screenwriting and found it very challenging but also very fun at the same time. So here's the result, my personal version of Thor 3:
Thor – The Twilight of the Gods (pdf)
is based on characters
owned by Marvel Entertainment, Inc. This script is unofficial and is
not associated with Marvel. It uses content copyright by Marvel, without
permission as fan-fiction. This material is used for the purpose of
informed discussion, and is not intended to interfere with Marvel's
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Enjoy reading! I am looking forward to your comments – praise is always welcome and well-founded criticism helps me to improve my skills. When you post, please include spoiler warnings where applicable.
Logline:
(Sci Fi, Fantasy) - After saving the nine realms, Thor stays on earth
with astrophysicist Jane Foster who has gone into hiding together with
Dr. Selvig, Darcy and Ian. Soon, an undercover S.H.I.E.L.D. spy shows
up, gains their trust, and accompanies Thor and Jane to Greenland where
Thor slays an astray frost beast and in doing so, unintentionally
awakens an ancient menace. Will Thor manage once more to avert the
impending destruction of the great World Tree or is Ragnarok upon the
Gods at last? (120 pages)
Really enjoyed your script. Great work !!
ReplyDeleteThis was my first time reading a fan made script. I think the original Marvel characters are on point. It really feels like it's Thor 3. I am a comic book artist/writer so I visualized the movie in my head. ( spoiler :-) ) The Midgard Serpent is a worthy foe. I also like how Loki played off on Odin back and forth. I am a character appearance and continuity enthusiast. If this script makes it to theaters I would like to see maybe Morgan Le Fay and Scarlet Witch, or Beta Ray Bill and a resurrected Kurse, and/or maybe even Ragnarok ( a clone of Thor ) make appearances if possible because they all have roles in the comic book storylines pertaining to the serpent as well. I enjoyed your script to where I was looking for end credit scene spoilers too ! (lol) All in all I think it is good work. Marvel should hire you !
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for the praise and for "watching" the script! ;-)
DeleteNow, picture this: The end credits are rolling, somewhere in the corner it says "Inspired by the work of R. H.-S.", and then suddenly, the spoiler scene comes up: Morgan Le Fay, Scarlet Witch, Beta Ray Bill, Kurse and Ragnarok sit at a table in a (the!) shawarma restaurant, drooping, eating. Ragnarok (muttering): "Ragnarok is also a person." The 5 exchange a desperate glance, collectively shake their heads. They resume eating.
Deal? :-)